Up On The Moon Mare

28 07 2006

Night rides harrow,

screech and howl,

long fingers catching the

edges of cloaks with long

nails, the black

sheer as shrieking.

Yet the mare takes a

rider to the stars this time,

the cloak rippling in the

lunar wind, shaking out

crags of old

illogical thinking, or

superstition.

The stars are bright,

not twinkling, glowing in the

velvet.

Close up they blaze like

fires, and friendly lights.

The mare has no trouble questing

the air,

winged and well shod by

the sturdy stablewomen,

who know their

art. 

(copyright Imogen Crest 2006.)


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6 responses

29 07 2006
Anita Marie

Fantastic…great read!

Anita Marie

29 07 2006
Heather Blakey

The imagery here is very powerful – and I have a strong sense of the release you experience on this ride Monika.

29 07 2006
lorigloyd

Wow! This is creepy.

29 07 2006
imogen88

Thanks gals! Heather no doubt you would be right.

29 07 2006
cronelogical

for once it suits, that word so often used, fantastic fantasy walk with you.

29 07 2006
soulsister

You have really managed to convey what this Heroines Journey is all about. Yes we will see frightening things, but the Stable women will keep us from getting completely lost, for their horses are ”winged and well shod”.

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